Well is it a sig or isnt it, because if it isnt im moving this to digi art.

anyway i think this would look alot better with 1 render rather then the 2 you have going. i also have no idea why the "graffic designs" is where it is, doesnt seem to have anything holding it there, its like its just floating in negative space. everything just seems far too busy, and those massive scanlines just dont help the picture. and keep the b/w, looks alright in this case.