Vizard

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Nice job man :) But I think you could add more splatter brush clipping mask on the left side.
And you could work more with text to get something better.
Overall really like it.

The text defenatly needs work, i'm out of ideas atm :3.

yea.text is the hardest part IMO. :/

It's not bad but it's nothign special either. it's solid.Text def needs work, and those diagonal lines are helping it.
The blending is okay but the smudging doesnt make sense! This is what bothers me the most. this is a vector render. Crisp lines crisp colors made of shapes and pen tooling. Why is the smudging blurry and the colors smudged together. It just doesn't mesh its liek trying to put BBQ sauce on a salad. Simply doesn't go.


You are a very talented sigmaker and designer. but you seem to be getting into this too mindlessly. Think about how your approaching it and if it makes sense necxt time.

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Originally Posted by Papa

It's not bad but it's nothign special either. it's solid.Text def needs work, and those diagonal lines are helping it.
The blending is okay but the smudging doesnt make sense! This is what bothers me the most. this is a vector render. Crisp lines crisp colors made of shapes and pen tooling. Why is the smudging blurry and the colors smudged together. It just doesn't mesh its liek trying to put BBQ sauce on a salad. Simply doesn't go.


You are a very talented sigmaker and designer. but you seem to be getting into this too mindlessly. Think about how your approaching it and if it makes sense necxt time.

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nice analogy:p

but yeah..ur a very talented guy..some sigs are amazing..others look uninspired bro.