It's not bad but it's nothign special either. it's solid.Text def needs work, and those diagonal lines are helping it.
The blending is okay but the smudging doesnt make sense! This is what bothers me the most. this is a vector render. Crisp lines crisp colors made of shapes and pen tooling. Why is the smudging blurry and the colors smudged together. It just doesn't mesh its liek trying to put BBQ sauce on a salad. Simply doesn't go.


You are a very talented sigmaker and designer. but you seem to be getting into this too mindlessly. Think about how your approaching it and if it makes sense necxt time.