Falling in Time [big image]

Im sure if I put this in the right catagory... if not, a mod can move it ><
http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/i/20...noshikatta.jpg
http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/i/20...noshikatta.jpg <- full size

I havent made anything in a while, and so I decided to make myself a new wallpaper ^^
Cnc is greatly appriciated

I love it! I would make a poster out of this

looks great :)

ooh i love the color scheme!
the pastels with the washed out colors looks great!
i hate the text. cut off and all... bleh, although its very artfully done :D
i'm a little OCD about some stuff, such as even placement... so the dots are making me a little uncomfortable, but i still love them.
i wish you had changed the black clothing the boy is wearing to a color thats a little less concentrated. the black pulls your eye away from the overall beauty and really skews the color scheme quite a bit. if the blue had been the same color as the text (navy blue?) it would have fit much better. don't change the text color to match the suit tho, it looks better toned down.

i love the checkered layer you have going on, mainly at the bottom and i like how you faded it.

grammatically speaking, the text should say "you and i are falling through time" or "you and i, falling through time" (or you could replace the comma with a -- or someting like that, but without it there's no subject-to-verb agreement there)

i love love love it :D
9.9/10 (the .1 for the black color and the grammar but thats cause i'm a grammar geek)

looks awesome

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Originally Posted by gr4ph1kP4ND4

grammatically speaking, the text should say "you and i are falling through time" or "you and i, falling through time" (or you could replace the comma with a -- or someting like that, but without it there's no subject-to-verb agreement there)

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Another possibility is 'You and me falling through time' Since there is a line break this can be considered 2 different sentences , and it would still llook good.

You and me isn't a very good because it just doesn't sound right...

And as for the thing, your drew it right? because it looks like it was taken out of a manga or something because of how you rendered it out, and my second thought was it might have been for effect.. i love how the text is cut off at the bottom it looks really well done (all of it) anyways, awesome job!

nawp.
thats air gear

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Originally Posted by gr4ph1kP4ND4

ooh i love the color scheme!
the pastels with the washed out colors looks great!
i hate the text. cut off and all... bleh, although its very artfully done :D
i'm a little OCD about some stuff, such as even placement... so the dots are making me a little uncomfortable, but i still love them.
i wish you had changed the black clothing the boy is wearing to a color thats a little less concentrated. the black pulls your eye away from the overall beauty and really skews the color scheme quite a bit. if the blue had been the same color as the text (navy blue?) it would have fit much better. don't change the text color to match the suit tho, it looks better toned down.

i love the checkered layer you have going on, mainly at the bottom and i like how you faded it.

grammatically speaking, the text should say "you and i are falling through time" or "you and i, falling through time" (or you could replace the comma with a -- or someting like that, but without it there's no subject-to-verb agreement there)

i love love love it :D
9.9/10 (the .1 for the black color and the grammar but thats cause i'm a grammar geek)

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I love you now, srs.
Thank you for the wonderful cnc!

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Originally Posted by MrK

You and me isn't a very good because it just doesn't sound right...

And as for the thing, your drew it right? because it looks like it was taken out of a manga or something because of how you rendered it out, and my second thought was it might have been for effect.. i love how the text is cut off at the bottom it looks really well done (all of it) anyways, awesome job!

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No, I didnt draw it, it is from a manga - Air Gear.
but I did render it and put the boxthingy around it ^^


Thank you loads, people!
It's nice to know when I do something right XD