ooh i love the color scheme!
the pastels with the washed out colors looks great!
i hate the text. cut off and all... bleh, although its very artfully done
i'm a little OCD about some stuff, such as even placement... so the dots are making me a little uncomfortable, but i still love them.
i wish you had changed the black clothing the boy is wearing to a color thats a little less concentrated. the black pulls your eye away from the overall beauty and really skews the color scheme quite a bit. if the blue had been the same color as the text (navy blue?) it would have fit much better. don't change the text color to match the suit tho, it looks better toned down.

i love the checkered layer you have going on, mainly at the bottom and i like how you faded it.

grammatically speaking, the text should say "you and i are falling through time" or "you and i, falling through time" (or you could replace the comma with a -- or someting like that, but without it there's no subject-to-verb agreement there)

i love love love it
9.9/10 (the .1 for the black color and the grammar but thats cause i'm a grammar geek)