Summer love

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V3:http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/429/summerv2.png
C&C, or w/e.

I like the way you positioned the text, and the concept of it.
However, the tag lacks on depth and because of that, it loses the focal point. I think it would look nice if you blurred the background a little.
Also, the stock doesn't fit the background due to the lighting and colors, so I'd advice you to work on the lighting. In my opinion, it would look nice with a mini light source placed at the top right area, overlapping a bit of her head.
When it comes to colors, a good way to blend the background w/ stock is using g- map. It works wonders.

K, going to fix the depth. And I'll blur the background a little bit more. And fix the colors so they blend a little better.

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Originally Posted by Fayfie

a good way to blend the background w/ stock is using g- map. It works wonders.

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gradient map?

Btw, this is my Primary account.

Yes that was meant to be gradient map :P

Pretty good but I do agree with fayfie apart from the text, I don't like it; its too blurred imo.

but depth definately needs work in this one,

kiu ren

Needs to be sharpened up a notch! Not really likin' the white stroke in front and color scheme is too dull. BG is lackluster. Work on your composition. Keep at it!