I like the way you positioned the text, and the concept of it.
However, the tag lacks on depth and because of that, it loses the focal point. I think it would look nice if you blurred the background a little.
Also, the stock doesn't fit the background due to the lighting and colors, so I'd advice you to work on the lighting. In my opinion, it would look nice with a mini light source placed at the top right area, overlapping a bit of her head.
When it comes to colors, a good way to blend the background w/ stock is using g- map. It works wonders.