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I like the colours and things but I think it's over topazed, try toning it down a bit and then I think it will look a lot better.

color are a little damp, but there's good focus and I think I see a little bit of distortion. I like distortion.

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Originally Posted by Draywin848

I like the colours and things but I think it's over topazed, try toning it down a bit and then I think it will look a lot better.

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Thanks, I wanted a cleaner look than what outcome was so I gave topaz a go, didn't think it was that bad. :p

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Originally Posted by KiwiBadGuy

color are a little damp, but there's good focus and I think I see a little bit of distortion. I like distortion.

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Thanks, yea there is alot of distortion in the background, I thought the lazer would look cooler if it was a little chaotic instead of straight and little things like that. :p

I don't like the topaz... Decrease the opacity on the topaz layer.

Too much topaz. Just use it slightly and it'll look cleaner while not ruining the look.
I also think the colours will improve if you took that topaz layer off.
I like the lighting and blending though. :)
Keep it up.

Get rid of the topaz it makes it look like arse.

Topaz

Ok, no topaz at all:
http://i271.photobucket.com/albums/j...picnotopaz.png

nice smooth work, MUCH better with no topaz.

kiu

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Originally Posted by Delite

Topaz

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Post like this are not welcome here. Give a real critique and help your fellow designer.