Halo

[Kaka11|LFC]

Stock: http://www.haloforever.com/images/wa...alo-3-1032.jpg

[Draywin848]

I like the colours and things but I think it's over topazed, try toning it down a bit and then I think it will look a lot better.

[KiwiBadGuy]

color are a little damp, but there's good focus and I think I see a little bit of distortion. I like distortion.

[Kaka11|LFC]

I like the colours and things but I think it's over topazed, try toning it down a bit and then I think it will look a lot better.

Thanks, I wanted a cleaner look than what outcome was so I gave topaz a go, didn't think it was that bad.

color are a little damp, but there's good focus and I think I see a little bit of distortion. I like distortion.

Thanks, yea there is alot of distortion in the background, I thought the lazer would look cooler if it was a little chaotic instead of straight and little things like that.

[Cap'n Jazz]

I don't like the topaz... Decrease the opacity on the topaz layer.

[Stiggeh]

Too much topaz. Just use it slightly and it'll look cleaner while not ruining the look.
I also think the colours will improve if you took that topaz layer off.
I like the lighting and blending though.
Keep it up.

[ratchetnclank]

Get rid of the topaz it makes it look like arse.

[Necrothalass]

Topaz

[Kaka11|LFC]

Ok, no topaz at all:

[-MM.Kritez]

nice smooth work, MUCH better with no topaz.

kiu

Topaz

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