Harry Potter - 2nd attempt

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08-08-2010, 12:45 PM
Stiggeh

Harry Potter - 2nd attempt

Decided that I didn't do enough with the stock the last time so I went for a smudge sig this time. :)

http://graphics.b3yondelite.co.uk/al...arrPotter2.png

Stock

Comments and criticisms appreciated. :)
08-08-2010, 02:30 PM
GFX_MC

i like but i would change one thing i think the light source is a lil to big and bright

i like the text and i like the effects good job keep it up ;)
08-08-2010, 02:37 PM
ratchetnclank

Love the sharpness and effects stig as well as the flow. A bit of floaty head syndrome here though.

Just one question.... why potter?
08-08-2010, 02:46 PM
Stiggeh

Quote:

Originally Posted by GFX_MC

i like but i would change one thing i think the light source is a lil to big and bright

i like the text and i like the effects good job keep it up ;)

Hehe still trying to get used to what is the right amount of brightness. :P
Thanks

Quote:

Originally Posted by ratchetnclank

Love the sharpness and effects stig as well as the flow. A bit of floaty head syndrome here though.

Just one question.... why potter?

Thanks, I'll try sort the floating head thing. :)
Erm... it's mainly to do with the font as it doesn't look right when it has two or more words imo.
I guess I could have gone with Harry though. ;)
08-08-2010, 02:59 PM
Takken

Lighting is poor. Soft brush at top does not = to good lighting. Work on your contrast and utilize the element in a way that creates much more pleasing composition. It looks rater dull. Text needs to go.
08-08-2010, 03:03 PM
ratchetnclank

Quote:

Originally Posted by Stig193

Hehe still trying to get used to what is the right amount of brightness. :P
Thanks

Thanks, I'll try sort the floating head thing. :)
Erm... it's mainly to do with the font as it doesn't look right when it has two or more words imo.
I guess I could have gone with Harry though. ;)

I meant why potter for the stock :p
08-08-2010, 03:16 PM
Stiggeh

Quote:

Originally Posted by Takken

Lighting is poor. Soft brush at top does not = to good lighting. Work on your contrast and utilize the element in a way that creates much more pleasing composition. It looks rater dull. Text needs to go.

That gives me more of an idea than "work on your effects" so thanks. :)
I do know soft brush at top doesn't mean good lighting though, I think I need to change the lighting on the cut.

Quote:

Originally Posted by ratchetnclank

I meant why potter for the stock :p

Harry Potter is awesome and you shall not have a word against it. ¬_¬
:P
08-08-2010, 04:11 PM
GFX_MC

Quote:

Originally Posted by Stig193

Harry Potter is awesome and you shall not have a word against it. ¬_¬
:P

agreed ^.^