Harry Potter - 2nd attempt

[Stiggeh]

Lighting is poor. Soft brush at top does not = to good lighting. Work on your contrast and utilize the element in a way that creates much more pleasing composition. It looks rater dull. Text needs to go.

That gives me more of an idea than "work on your effects" so thanks.
I do know soft brush at top doesn't mean good lighting though, I think I need to change the lighting on the cut.

I meant why potter for the stock

Harry Potter is awesome and you shall not have a word against it. ¬_¬
:P