Over Used anime tag

i know it sucks but cnc :D

http://img585.imageshack.us/img585/3448/kinganime2.png

Very simple...you can do a better job

i didnt know what to add to it so just added some c4ds and smudge

I think the main problem here is the overbrightened face.
You made it so bright that we can't even see here mouth :p
So I would tone that down a bit.

The render could use some blending as well.
Just try to use some c4d's or other effects and place them in front of the render.
Cause the effects that I see now are, if I am right, all from the render itself. (except one effects c4d, the little orange dots on the right side)

The contrast between the dark space and the bright space is too big imo.
I would tone down the brightness and the darkness some. Cause some places are too dark and some too bright.

I liek the text placemnt, It goes well with the floww.
Youçe also created some good depht... It just needs some more imo.
GJ and keep it up :D

its very 1 sided imo everything is going on in the left part of the tag and nothing is going on in the right side you gotta make the tag flow and be even in some way man keep workin man i know u can do better

yeah utried so much in flow on one side it kills other side all together and makes look plain and i seen better from u but kiu man

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Originally Posted by cs4pro

I think the main problem here is the overbrightened face.
You made it so bright that we can't even see here mouth :p
So I would tone that down a bit.

The render could use some blending as well.
Just try to use some c4d's or other effects and place them in front of the render.
Cause the effects that I see now are, if I am right, all from the render itself. (except one effects c4d, the little orange dots on the right side)

The contrast between the dark space and the bright space is too big imo.
I would tone down the brightness and the darkness some. Cause some places are too dark and some too bright.

I liek the text placemnt, It goes well with the floww.
Youçe also created some good depht... It just needs some more imo.
GJ and keep it up :D

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i did some effects behind her also but they flow with her body shape but thanks for the detailed opinion mate its helped me alot

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Originally Posted by UnDeRoAtH

its very 1 sided imo everything is going on in the left part of the tag and nothing is going on in the right side you gotta make the tag flow and be even in some way man keep workin man i know u can do better

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yeah i just realised i might come up with a v2 not sure yet

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Originally Posted by sirenzo

yeah utried so much in flow on one side it kills other side all together and makes look plain and i seen better from u but kiu man

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thanks for the cnc again mate

As said above, left is too empty. Its also a bit too bright for my liking, and im not really digging it. But GREAT job on the text

Love the depth , but light on her face isnt much :/ to like.
Text isnt bad, but quite big, and u seriously should so something about that light on her face!