Banana

I was really bored, and I've been seeing posting similar stuff on tumblr so I decided to give it a go. Pretty simple if you ask me.
http://i.imgur.com/n1dny.png

lmfao man wtf... hhhhhhhh........Top of the banana could use some more work.

The shadow of the bananas are poorly rendered, try soft erase/mask the edges at low opacity.
The typo is to far out the edges and lose the . (dot).

Other then that simple yet effective.

Pretty cool and simple, giving a nice taste to the piece :)
I like the text, but like rad said, you might want to lose the (dot) and even the text out more :)
The shadows need work and also the top is a bit too sharpened and you can spot a very thin, yet dark and noticable, line :)
Looks slick though :D Keep it up

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Originally Posted by +s9.KroniiK

lmfao man wtf... hhhhhhhh........Top of the banana could use some more work.

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Need some carbs in your diet, bro.

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Originally Posted by cC.RadillacVIII

The shadow of the bananas are poorly rendered, try soft erase/mask the edges at low opacity.
The typo is to far out the edges and lose the . (dot).

Other then that simple yet effective.

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Will do!

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Originally Posted by ruhGz

Pretty cool and simple, giving a nice taste to the piece :)
I like the text, but like rad said, you might want to lose the (dot) and even the text out more :)
The shadows need work and also the top is a bit too sharpened and you can spot a very thin, yet dark and noticable, line :)
Looks slick though :D Keep it up

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Thanks!

No problem :)