Photomanipulation !

The new one is great, much improved. :D

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Originally Posted by Dale

Much much better :)
Very impressed.

A few things i would still do personally, but excellent improvement!

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thanks :D
Always open for ideas and criticism :)
let me know what I could do better :)

And thanks Ptka :D

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Originally Posted by modafokka

thanks :D
Always open for ideas and criticism :)
let me know what I could do better :)

And thanks Ptka :D

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If you would like to know, i would blend the water some more where it meets the land. Maybe clone tool in some small gulleys / rivers where it cuts through the land before the main body. I would also change the tones to match that of the sky a little better.

Also I would add some variation in hue / saturation (Desaturate a little in particular ) to the sky, just to make it a little more interesting. Or maybe just even heighten the canvas and leave a nice empty ( or starfield ) space up there, just to make everything seem less cramped.

But as I said before, great improvement on #1!

I don't want you to feel like I am criticizing you too harshly, sorry if you feel I am. Just say and i'll shutup. ;)

In fact i do like your work, and i'm just trying to help you polish your ideas because as we can see the progression from 1 to 2 shows you are clearly able!

yes sir, v2 is much better.

LOL! thats all i have to say