http://i36.tinypic.com/14oaf0y.png
http://i36.tinypic.com/mjuyo9.jpg
Yes i used a tutorial.
Photo Retouching
Printable View
-
10-11-2008, 03:24 PMFederationPhoto Retouching
-
10-11-2008, 04:05 PMGaris
I dont see big different. maybe just darker face or something.
-
10-11-2008, 04:09 PMLewk
Yeah same. and some hilights to the cheeks
-
10-12-2008, 11:46 AMPapa
TBH i don't see a lot of work here. Yes you got her skin tones pretty nicley in the top one. But really theres a ton more work that should be done here.
Here eyes could be sharpened and dodged/burned to bring them out more. She has too many stray hairs too, you should try to minimize that, and the Umbrella should be darkened a bit.
Also, am i the only person to notice that there is a ring of redness around her hairline/head? needs some cleaning up. -
10-12-2008, 11:47 AMLewk
Yeah, I see a red patch in the Hair line..
-
10-12-2008, 01:34 PMFederationthats where you wrong.Quote:
Originally Posted by Papa
i worked on everything but the umbrella and the hair. i got lazy. -
10-12-2008, 04:31 PMPapaI disagree. The only noticeable work is in the skin tones. It doesn't matter what you did where if it makes slim to no impact on the photo itself.Quote:
Originally Posted by Federation
-
10-13-2008, 06:29 AMratchetnclank
She has grey hairs in her eyebrows which need sorting. Her smile is ugly i would take one from another photo and clone it on. The big indent on her right(our left) jaw would need to be softened. Her eyes could do eith sharpen as papa said. Her hair looks dry and straw like i would add more tones to counter this.
Tbh there is loads more you can do. -
10-14-2008, 12:37 AMAces High
Dang ratchet! I think the smile's fine. I agree with the rest of what's been said. Work on it some more and keep us updated!
-
10-15-2008, 05:47 AMFederationsorry. you know nothing about retouching then.Quote:
Originally Posted by Papa
-
10-15-2008, 11:22 PMPapaI disagree in that as well. If you were to show that to a client they would make you do more. I'm not dissing your work, you nailed the skin tones.Quote:
Originally Posted by Federation
However you simply CANNOT have hair frizzed about like that.
I don't know what experience you have in retouching, as this being off of a tutorial; However I do not appreciate being told i have no clue on it.
That said, next time if you don't want actual CnC don't ask for it. -
10-16-2008, 02:13 AMratchetnclankQuote:
Originally Posted by Papa
Papa can do re-touch, and knows what he is talking about.
OP you're a tool. -
10-16-2008, 10:21 AMFederationif you knew anything about retouching you would notice what parts i have worked on and which i havent. You noticed the most noticable part only.Quote:
Originally Posted by Papa
-
10-16-2008, 10:36 AMPapaEven in the respect that if i did have no clue on retouch, I still wouldn't flat out say to anybody, you know nothign about retouch, when they are TRYING TO HELP YOU. BY posting it up you asked for cnc and i gave it to you. If you don't like it don't listen to it. Thats the beauty of a forum, if you don't like something then you can ignore it as easy as clicking a button.Quote:
Originally Posted by Federation
-
10-16-2008, 10:55 AMratchetnclankQuote:
Originally Posted by Federation
link us to the tut then so we can see exactly what you did.
