Quote Originally Posted by Papa View Post
TBH i don't see a lot of work here. Yes you got her skin tones pretty nicley in the top one. But really theres a ton more work that should be done here.
Here eyes could be sharpened and dodged/burned to bring them out more. She has too many stray hairs too, you should try to minimize that, and the Umbrella should be darkened a bit.

Also, am i the only person to notice that there is a ring of redness around her hairline/head? needs some cleaning up.
thats where you wrong.
i worked on everything but the umbrella and the hair. i got lazy.