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I like the colours and things but I think it's over topazed, try toning it down a bit and then I think it will look a lot better.

color are a little damp, but there's good focus and I think I see a little bit of distortion. I like distortion.

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Originally Posted by Draywin848

I like the colours and things but I think it's over topazed, try toning it down a bit and then I think it will look a lot better.

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Thanks, I wanted a cleaner look than what outcome was so I gave topaz a go, didn't think it was that bad. :p

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Originally Posted by KiwiBadGuy

color are a little damp, but there's good focus and I think I see a little bit of distortion. I like distortion.

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Thanks, yea there is alot of distortion in the background, I thought the lazer would look cooler if it was a little chaotic instead of straight and little things like that. :p

I don't like the topaz... Decrease the opacity on the topaz layer.

Too much topaz. Just use it slightly and it'll look cleaner while not ruining the look.
I also think the colours will improve if you took that topaz layer off.
I like the lighting and blending though. :)
Keep it up.

Get rid of the topaz it makes it look like arse.

Topaz

Ok, no topaz at all:
http://i271.photobucket.com/albums/j...picnotopaz.png

nice smooth work, MUCH better with no topaz.

kiu

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Originally Posted by Delite

Topaz

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Post like this are not welcome here. Give a real critique and help your fellow designer.

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Originally Posted by Kritez

nice smooth work, MUCH better with no topaz.

kiu



Post like this are not welcome here. Give a real critique and help your fellow designer.

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He's right. :D

Yeah now you can see the distortion better, good work man.

waaayyyyyy too much topaz. imo on the one without topaz, the focal is too blurry.

Thanks for all the comments guys, first time I used topaz so I think I've learn't my lesson now. :p

Looks amazing man, really beautiful lighting. Don't care what you use to get to the result, if it looks coo then I'll like it. :D