Shaco

http://i973.photobucket.com/albums/a...umo/shaco2.png

Tried something new. Any thoughts?

Just on the face.

is there a focal ? i cant find it lol make a nice abstract tho

Yeah...the focal is the face

You can't really miss it, or at least I find it hard not to see it xD

I would like to see you take out the blurred bokeh stocks. They are unnecessary and cause a sense of confusion. Take em out first and then ill cnc it

Without the bokeh :

http://i973.photobucket.com/albums/a...o/shaco2-b.png

i liked it with bokeh try to darken the edges with the bokeh on it should help bring out the focal

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Originally Posted by JustInCredible

I would like to see you take out the blurred bokeh stocks. They are unnecessary and cause a sense of confusion. Take em out first and then ill cnc it

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What is that? He must make his sig in the way you like to even be worthy of your silly CnC?

Eat a crayon. =D

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Originally Posted by littlefeet

What is that? He must make his sig in the way you like to even be worthy of your silly CnC?

Eat a crayon. =D

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No he does not have to make a sig my way. I merely made a suggestion to improve his sig which is cnc in itself. I couldnt cnc it cause it was difficult to diferentiate the different aspects of the sig due to the bokeh stock. The sig looks alot better without the bokeh stocks imo.

I noticed you've been trollin every since that SOTW discussion we had. Dont tell me to eat a crayon we should battle instead so you can stop your useless trolling...

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Originally Posted by JustInCredible

No he does not have to make a sig my way. I merely made a suggestion to improve his sig which is cnc in itself. I couldnt cnc it cause it was difficult to diferentiate the different aspects of the sig due to the bokeh stock. The sig looks alot better without the bokeh stocks imo.

I noticed you've been trollin every since that SOTW discussion we had. Dont tell me to eat a crayon we should battle instead so you can stop your useless trolling...

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How is that trolling? Crayons are good for your health and they make you more artistic!

You didn't make a suggestion. You told him very plainly that if he wanted any CnC from you he would have to take out parts you did not like first. I thought that was pretty silly, but if you want to put your banana pants on that's fine. I would be more than happy to battle you even though I have no idea what that has to do with any of this. Is it like, "If I beat you in a battle I can be rude to anyone I want and you cannot tell me to eat school supplies"?

Ok then, you name the time and place. I will bring my pajamas. I hope your crew is foot deep in hot sauce though because I'm going to bring enough glitter to convince a lama that it is a lady bug. I will wear my french bread shoes and pre-butter them for the battle. You can pick the theme. And you are just incredible so I'm sure you will win 20-0 because you are just incredibly popular. A couple theme suggestions from me are: Unicorns. Rainbows. Unicorn rainbows. Rainbow Unicorns.

But you can pick whatever.

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Originally Posted by littlefeet

How is that trolling? Crayons are good for your health and they make you more artistic!

You didn't make a suggestion. You told him very plainly that if he wanted any CnC from you he would have to take out parts you did not like first. I thought that was pretty silly, but if you want to put your banana pants on that's fine. I would be more than happy to battle you even though I have no idea what that has to do with any of this. Is it like, "If I beat you in a battle I can be rude to anyone I want and you cannot tell me to eat school supplies"?

Ok then, you name the time and place. I will bring my pajamas. I hope your crew is foot deep in hot sauce though because I'm going to bring enough glitter to convince a lama that it is a lady bug. I will wear my french bread shoes and pre-butter them for the battle. You can pick the theme. And you are just incredible so I'm sure you will win 20-0 because you are just incredibly popular. A couple theme suggestions from me are: Unicorns. Rainbows. Unicorn rainbows. Rainbow Unicorns.

But you can pick whatever.

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seriously? crayons are good for your health?

I made a suggestion. He can take it however he wants. all cnc is just suggestions. If he didnt take it out i still woulda gave him cnc but at a minimum point.

The point of battlin you is to shut you up. Seriously dude, your crude comments are immature and is annoyin the shit outta me.

Your stupid ass comments about me being popular and unicorns just make me want to battle you even more. But at this point if we do battle youll probably end up makin some sort of uselss sig that would even further waste my time.

This thread is aboutt he sig so ima just drop it here.

Please just stop quotin what I post. You have 100 post here. You dont even make any sort of art that is recognizable to the community. Im a mod here so before you make any "funny" comments think about that. Im not abusin my power but merely statin what power I have.

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Originally Posted by JustInCredible

seriously? crayons are good for your health?

I made a suggestion. He can take it however he wants. all cnc is just suggestions. If he didnt take it out i still woulda gave him cnc but at a minimum point.

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Well uh...can I get that cnc now? I'm relatively sure it's a bad tag, but meh. I would like to know some area's I can improve upon. I've taken colds advice about the tag with the bokeh, now I'd like some for without it.

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Originally Posted by JustInCredible

seriously? crayons are good for your health?

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It looks like someone stole your humor hat and hid it under you hatred hat. =(

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I made a suggestion. He can take it however he wants. all cnc is just suggestions. If he didnt take it out i still woulda gave him cnc but at a minimum point.

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Not what you told him, but ok. =D

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The point of battlin you is to shut you up. Seriously dude, your crude comments are immature and is annoyin the shit outta me.

Your stupid ass comments about me being popular and unicorns just make me want to battle you even more. But at this point if we do battle youll probably end up makin some sort of uselss sig that would even further waste my time.

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Oh I am sorry that my comments about unicorns make your blood boil and happiness is a thorn in your Snidely Whiplash side. I do not see how a comment about you being popular could be a bad comment, but then you are just incredible, so you probably just read incredibly far into it.

From now on I will not talk about cute things because grrrrrrrrrr! They just piss you off so much!

You seemed so eager to battle before, but now I'm not worth your time? Which is it? Do you want to shut me up or not? Or are you just incredibly confused? You're probably afraid I will use a unicorn render aren't you? And that would make you just so incredibly mad!

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This thread is aboutt he sig so ima just drop it here.

Please just stop quotin what I post. You have 100 post here. You dont even make any sort of art that is recognizable to the community. Im a mod here so before you make any "funny" comments think about that. Im not abusin my power but merely statin what power I have.

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You are just stating you have what power? That seems silly. Are you threatening me simply because I disagreed with you? That also seems silly. If you want to get me in trouble for talking about french bread I don't think anyone would blame you. And the unicorns comment? Unforgivable! unicorns are a ban on site offense! Look out, tomorrow I plan on talking about penguins! Grrrrrr! Penguins make me so furious!

Hug Hug Hug.

I think with the Bokeh stock was used as a filler to take up space in the sig rather than create an sense of improvement. Maybe by changin the color of the Bokeh to a dark Purple or some shade of Violet you can achieve the goal you are lookin for.

The Blurred bokeh makes it confusin and hard to differentiate the focal. They are semiblurred and the shade of gray makes it hard for you to distinguish the focal. Once you do find the focal there is nothing else too look at.

Without the Bokeh stock you got some room to work with. You can create alot of depth with this. The sides are a bit messy and you can improve it by creatin some sort of flow with the clip mask. Or can I suggest adding some sorta C4D and usin a curves layer to make it reallly dark to create some sense of controlled chaos. I would like to see a tiny bit more or that dark purple color OR that cyan color from the eyes.

Lightin could make or break this piece. Lightin could create depth and a better atmosphere. Right now if you look at it without the Bokeh stock the render has only the head. I would show some more of the shoulder. The current lighting you have right now is all comin from the top in a striaght line which is incorrect. As you can see the lighting comes from the top right and behind the face. try workin with that through lighting effects and then make the back a bit lighter and then makin the face darker. Then try to burn and dodge to make the lightin correct

lol @eat a crayon :P
too cute little feet
um any ways i realylove the use of colors in here if you could maybe bring back more of your focal i think would lok much stronger of a tag imo but looking good tho kiu

ya make me laugh tinyfeet.

Ive never met somebody past 5 that still has a good time with unicorns. The fact that you still say "grrrrrrrrrrrr" to signify anger and all the other things you say just make me realize that there are some wierd ass people on the internet.

The fact that you make fun of my name just gives me a reason to just leave you alone.

I bet you are havin a good laugh at how riled up i am over some internet stuff. Good. Glad you find enjoyment out of all of this.

I think about just what kinda person you are behind the computer screen and it makes me feel stupid for even talkin to you. lmfao

The one without the bokeh is just t3h sex
wowow

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Originally Posted by JustInCredible

ya make me laugh tinyfeet.

Ive never met somebody past 5 that still has a good time with unicorns. The fact that you still say "grrrrrrrrrrrr" to signify anger and all the other things you say just make me realize that there are some wierd ass people on the internet.

The fact that you make fun of my name just gives me a reason to just leave you alone.

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I think I should write a book called "How to leave people alone." Because you are doing a very bad job of it. :/

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I bet you are havin a good laugh at how riled up i am over some internet stuff. Good. Glad you find enjoyment out of all of this.

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I am not having a laugh at how riled up you are. I am having at cry at how confused you are. First you say you wont give CnC until he takes off some effects, then you say you will give CnC anyway just "less." First you get mad at me, then you say I'm making you laugh. First you challenge me to a battle, then you unchallenge me to a battle. First you say you want to just leave me alone, then you don't just leave me alone. First you say you don't like unicorns, then you say you ride unicorns. You are a very confusing person!

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I think about just what kinda person you are behind the computer screen and it makes me feel stupid for even talkin to you. lmfao

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Well you might feel stupid for talking to me...you definitely look it. =D

Battle Theme- cotton candy kisses. Due tomorrow.

Enough of the spam, CnC the actual signature, not other people's comments about it.

Start behaving, or I'll bust out my power of infinite indifference and wash away all your glitter and rainbows with a bucket of beige, ha.

Don't make me get my plastic back seat mod badge.


On topic:

I like you effects true, but it's too hard to distinguish the focal from the background.

Yeah, I've been working on it for a while now, taking Justin's advice of course, and it just seems that I'm making it worse.

:/

Perhaps I'll just let this one go.

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Originally Posted by TRUeLM

Without the bokeh :

http://i973.photobucket.com/albums/a...o/shaco2-b.png

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Originally Posted by JustInCredible

I think with the Bokeh stock was used as a filler to take up space in the sig rather than create an sense of improvement. Maybe by changin the color of the Bokeh to a dark Purple or some shade of Violet you can achieve the goal you are lookin for.

The Blurred bokeh makes it confusin and hard to differentiate the focal. They are semiblurred and the shade of gray makes it hard for you to distinguish the focal. Once you do find the focal there is nothing else too look at.

Without the Bokeh stock you got some room to work with. You can create alot of depth with this. The sides are a bit messy and you can improve it by creatin some sort of flow with the clip mask. Or can I suggest adding some sorta C4D and usin a curves layer to make it reallly dark to create some sense of controlled chaos. I would like to see a tiny bit more or that dark purple color OR that cyan color from the eyes.

Lightin could make or break this piece. Lightin could create depth and a better atmosphere. Right now if you look at it without the Bokeh stock the render has only the head. I would show some more of the shoulder. The current lighting you have right now is all comin from the top in a striaght line which is incorrect. As you can see the lighting comes from the top right and behind the face. try workin with that through lighting effects and then make the back a bit lighter and then makin the face darker. Then try to burn and dodge to make the lightin correct

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^This.

My suggestions for lighting, is to darken the bottom more and increase the lightsource from the top right. The light on the stock/render makes it seem as though it's coming from the top. Try to bring the focal out more and create some depth. Also, I want that stock/render....like now.

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Originally Posted by furbz

^This.

My suggestions for lighting, is to darken the bottom more and increase the lightsource from the top right. The light on the stock/render makes it seem as though it's coming from the top. Try to bring the focal out more and create some depth. Also, I want that stock/render....like now.

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I'm sure I have it somewhere aswell, I'll have a look.

just epic

i think v2 is better

but what anime / game is the protagonist?
p.s. can i have the stock/render?

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Originally Posted by Snayke

just epic

i think v2 is better

but what anime / game is the protagonist?
p.s. can i have the stock/render?

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its shaco from league of legends

OMG! the tag haz potential! i really love the contrast though the issue about them bokeh's? uhh? make it blend more on the atmo soo that it won't look that empty. and do you mind if i ask you if its a render? if so can i colab with it? :F

It's a stock. Here it is, in case Aether didn't find it :

http://www.leagueoflegends.com/board...2&d=1291969151

Nice I couldn't find it:)