New Sig - let me know :)

I've been posting critiques on all of your signatures hopefully you all can give it back to me.

http://img195.imageshack.us/img195/5...ntlookaway.png

Comments and critique are welcome

Wow, Bro ur signatures are A-M-A-Z-I-N-G! (In bold:D)
Very dedacatied, and amazing Nice lighting, render Size, Font i cant find 1 flaw no madder how hard i try Amazing! This is why ur my 2nt favorite artist here.

2nd favorite -_-

Thanks for the comment :)

Ketg is mai favorite D:

I'm not feeling the old English "H" it's a very nice tag overall though I feel the lighting could have been tweaked in a few area's and seems a bit over sharpened and the area to the left of the doll thing is a tag to dark I assume you were trying to cast a shadow off of the doll it's self?

The focal looks a bit over sharpened or lq-ish, not feeling the blue gradient, depth is good, lighting is nice, try not to center you focal, the c4d flow/usage is good. Not a fan of the text tho... good stuff man keep it up.

Thanks for the comments everyone :)

Hm agree the focal looks lq, love the lightning and bg, text is cool too
great tag

I feel as if there is unnecessary space within the sig. It is a bit too wide imo.
I love what you did with the text but the overall positioning imo could be lower and a bit closer to the focal so that it doesn't grab too much attention. Maybe Burn the corners of the sigs.
Another thing I noticed was the sharpening of the sig and it's depth. The overall direction of the depth is going great but the c4d behind her could be blurred a bit but not too much.
Otherwise it is a great sig and I'm loving the concept.

I like your depth and your monotoned color, but your text and your render look low quality. I think the render may be a tad oversharpened and your text is a bit too blurry for where it is in the signature. I don't know how I feel about the pixel font sub-text.

I really like what you did with the effects in the background but your lighting feels very flat and should be much darker at the sides. The little red guy doesn't really blend with the blue-ish sig, and your render is over sharpened and there seems to be like a weird dark blue shadow behind her shoulder. Good job overall! Keep it up=D

If I had even 1 / 4 of the skill that you have, I'd be interested in continuing to design...

Amazing design, Helix. I honestly envy your talent.

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Originally Posted by xSh4d0w Sh0cKx

If I had even 1 / 4 of the skill that you have, I'd be interested in continuing to design...

Amazing design, Helix. I honestly envy your talent.

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Dude I really wish I could show you the sigs I used to make... Don't give up.

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Originally Posted by Helix

Dude I really wish I could show you the sigs I used to make... Don't give up.

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I know people will start giving me shit for saying this, but it's how I feel right now, so I don't care...

I've been reading and watching tutorial after tutorial for days on end now, and I can't seem to get my designs to look any better. It's always something that makes them look below even the rank of "amateur," whether it be the lighting, the way I blended the render, the text that I used, the opacity of this layer, or that layer, and the list goes on for decades.

People don't realize how much their words can actually hurt a person, regardless of whether they intended them to or not... When a person strives so much, and tries so hard to be a better designer, and make designs that people look at and say "wow," only to be told in polite words that they haven't made it past the skill level of a child's finger paintings, it tends to put a damper on their will to continue...

Sorry for cluttering your thread; I guess I'll just be going. If you have anything else you want to say, send it to me in a PM; I'm anti-clutter when it comes to people's threads.

not bad bro looks too bright for my taste but nice flow and depth and looks a bit sharpened on the hair on the focal gj tho kiu m8