Ironman Sig

http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/...tw21v5-2-1.png
Can I get some comments and critique please? :O

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Originally Posted by SideEffect

Can I get some comments and critique please? :O

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http://i2.kym-cdn.com/entries/icons/...23/untitle.JPG

Oh, ok ;( I guess ill find another gfx forum D:

please do

you guys are rude. making this forum more dead than it already it is.
I mean the last 1 week and half ive seen more activity than the past few months and U R FKING EVERYTHING UP :(

I demand 1 week ban for both of u

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Originally Posted by LightningK

you guys are rude. making this forum more dead than it already it is.
I mean the last 1 week and half ive seen more activity than the past few months and U R FKING EVERYTHING UP :(

I demand 1 week ban for both of u

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You take life way too seriously dude.

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Originally Posted by Distello

You take life way too seriously dude.

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NOT EVEN ONCE....

Actually, I did ONCE, but never again.

ah those nubs who dont understand sarcasm

First things first, I love the atmosphere you have going on here. Although the text looks a little rough, the color looks good but I would try placing it closer to his glowing center. The motion blur on the right looks a little too prominent, and appears rather suddenly. So maybe try lowering the opacity on that layer?
I think it could use a little work depth wise so try both these methods and see what works for you. 1) a black-white gradient map on luminosity. 2) Apply the image on a new layer and run a high pass filter (filters>other>high pass) Try that layer on soft light and lower the opacity a bit.

I hope that helped and it's a really good tag bro

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Originally Posted by Mega

ah those nubs who dont understand sarcasm

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Right, because reading sarcasm over the internet is so easy! Noobs these days.

lol I was being sarcastic.

Thanks Intrepid I will see if I can make it look better with your advice. :D

http://f.kulfoto.com/pic/0001/0034/do95333813.jpg


it doesnt take a genius to realise when sarcasm is being used
"The definition of sarcasm is mocking humor, or the use of irony to make a joke."
it doesnt say anywhere that it cant be used over the internet or has to be used whilst talking,

+ once you get used to the forum you'll realise that everything Distello says is sarcastic

SOOOOOO

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lol I was being sarcastic.

Thanks Intrepid I will see if I can make it look better with your advice. http://images.gfxvoid.com/forums/ima...es/biggrin.png

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http://images5.fanpop.com/image/phot...13-500-346.jpg

Any other comments and critique? :P

Don't mind the trolls, SideEffect, they have nothing better to do with their time.

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Originally Posted by SideEffect

http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/...tw21v5-2-1.png

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I would say that the colors and blending is phenomenal, really great work.

My suggestions would be to remove the text, it's a clean tag that speaks for itself, the text only clutters it up and ruins the smoothness of the tag.
The orange half circle/wave at the bottom, underneath his chest beam, is distracting. I'd say remove it completely and add some smaller effects that match the rest of the sig.
For depth enhancement, what Intrepid said is good suggestions.
I really like the blurring flow you got going on. You could add a few blurred lines over his right arm as well, since I think it pops out too much.

The rest is sexy and well composed :encouragement:

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Originally Posted by cC.RadillacVIII

Don't mind the trolls, SideEffect, they have nothing better to do with their time.



I would say that the colors and blending is phenomenal, really great work.

My suggestions would be to remove the text, it's a clean tag that speaks for itself, the text only clutters it up and ruins the smoothness of the tag.
The orange half circle/wave at the bottom, underneath his chest beam, is distracting. I'd say remove it completely and add some smaller effects that match the rest of the sig.
For depth enhancement, what Intrepid said is good suggestions.
I really like the blurring flow you got going on. You could add a few blurred lines over his right arm as well, since I think it pops out too much.

The rest is sexy and well composed :encouragement:

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Thanks for the comments. :D

"The orange half circle/wave at the bottom, underneath his chest beam" Are you talking about his leg? lol

http://www.deviantart.com/art/Ironman-Render-351346975 Here is the original render. o.o

yeah, he pointed out his leg. It's probably best to erase/smudge it out somehow
It's somehow started to look like a c4d on low opacity

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Originally Posted by cC.RadillacVIII

Don't mind the trolls, SideEffect, they have nothing better to do with their time.

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We really don't D= Apart from masturbate.

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Originally Posted by SideEffect

Thanks for the comments. :D

"The orange half circle/wave at the bottom, underneath his chest beam" Are you talking about his leg? lol

http://www.deviantart.com/art/Ironman-Render-351346975 Here is the original render. o.o

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Originally Posted by Intrepidmisfortune

yeah, he pointed out his leg. It's probably best to erase/smudge it out somehow
It's somehow started to look like a c4d on low opacity

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Exactly, that's what I also saw it as Intre :)

Yeah erase it would be a good call SE.

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Originally Posted by Distello

We really don't D= Apart from masturbate.

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You aren't even a troll. lol nicetrytho

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You aren't even a troll. lol nicetrytho

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you are mistaken my friend for he is the largest and ugliest troll on this site thus a victim of online abuse, for further information please view the chat box

gud compo...

yup i agree to the one hu said to remove the text.. its disturbing... but if u really like to put some text... play with it more..

and a little sharpen to ur focal...

kiu

Some C4D should look nice, also maybe some on the front for more depth