GFXVoid Graphic Design Forum

Remove Text Formatting
Loading...

» Online Users: 160

0 members and 160 guests
No Members online

» Site Navigation

 > FAQ

» Stats

Members: 35,445
Threads: 103,050
Posts: 826,599
Top Poster: cc.RadillacVIII (7,427)
Welcome to our newest member, Lekelindids
Results 1 to 9 of 9

Thread: DBZ Goku

  1. #1
    Join Date
    Jan 2009
    Location
    Northamptonshire, England
    Posts
    294

    Default DBZ Goku

    Haven't used this site much but I hear you give really helpful C&C and that's what I need because I'm sort of stuck on whether it feels empty or not. Suggestions would be helpful.



    Thanks in advance.


  2. #2
    Join Date
    Feb 2008
    Location
    Toronto, Canada
    Posts
    4,831

    Default

    very empty bro
    the effects on the bottom right of the render are nice
    text imo is nicely done but i tink should be placed left of the render
    rest is ok.
    if you can add something else like hmm a c4d?
    it'd be better
    keep at it!






  3. #3

    Default

    i love it.
    everything about it is awesome.
    i only think goku should be lighter.
    Illidan:

  4. #4
    Join Date
    Mar 2005
    Location
    USA
    Posts
    1,336

    Default

    It does sort of give off an unfinished look. The center is cool and all, but I'm not really big on cutouts or stocks in signatures. Mostly because if you use a stock or cutout, that's a chunk of work that isn't yours. Yeah you can doodle all over it and make it look pretty, but that doesn't make it any more yours :P. That being said, I can't tell where you took the time to do something original with it. I like the grid designs, but the stock overwhelms it. I'd like to see more work in it, but if you're going for minimalism, that's entirely your call. I would be interested in seeing what else you could do with it though.




  5. #5

    Default

    that is honestly one of the only DBZ sigs that i have ever liked
    i like it
    wouldn't change a think

    i like this "unfinished" look

    the only small thing i think that could improve it would be to fix the lighting
    i doubt many would notice
    but your lighting concept actually contradicts that of the original stock

    however i still think it look nice
    †God Bless†






    ~See through eyes, unclouded by hate~

    my deviant art
    http://t-john316-t.deviantart.com/





  6. #6
    Join Date
    Oct 2007
    Posts
    2,782

    Default

    Oh HAI stig.


    Nice sig i love the effects you got going on, really good. As immortal said dump that text over to the left and it will fix the emptyness.

    Great work


  7. #7
    Join Date
    Apr 2008
    Location
    Sydney
    Posts
    293

    Default

    yeah there is alot of open space in this sig it feels like there are two lighting directions,
    perhaps some more lighting effects to follow the lighting of the render (from the top right)

    I do like the style, but it seems like many people are following a similar effect nowadays, with Central renders,
    C4d Backgrounds, clipping mask, vector brushes and smudging towards the foreground. It's not bad but it is very common.
    Plus i like this style to tell you the truth.

    7/10



  8. #8
    Join Date
    Jan 2009
    Location
    Northamptonshire, England
    Posts
    294

    Default

    Thanks for the comments. I really appreciate suggestions because I really was stuck. Anyway, I think I made a mistake using this render because it really was hard for me to use because it isn't exactly the most space filling render.

    Thanks again. Might use this website more often for C&C because you guys are a great help.


  9. #9
    Join Date
    Mar 2009
    Location
    Maryland,USA
    Posts
    1,060

    Default

    idk if i would get rid of the txt completely because honestly i think it looks good, however maybe move the stig txt over to the left of goku and make both the stig and the goku txt smaller, get the goku render to really be the audience's center of attention

    other than that looks good nj! love the effects
    Last edited by excellence; 03-27-2009 at 02:27 PM.





    In all deepest reality, we may only imagine the days past us, knowing that anything and all happens; and time will never be written until the happening... The future is 'eXcellence'.

    eXx

Similar Threads

  1. DragonBall Z goku sig
    By sirenzo in forum Sigs & Manips
    Replies: 6
    Last Post: 11-18-2008, 06:56 AM
  2. Sprite sig goku
    By asdio in forum Sigs & Manips
    Replies: 3
    Last Post: 05-01-2008, 09:18 PM
  3. goku
    By imported_worldikon in forum Digital Art
    Replies: 4
    Last Post: 04-14-2006, 02:49 PM
  4. Smiling Demon vs Goku
    By Smiling Demon in forum Battlegrounds
    Replies: 23
    Last Post: 03-19-2006, 03:49 PM
  5. New Goku Sig
    By GreeneBeast in forum Sigs & Manips
    Replies: 3
    Last Post: 02-27-2005, 05:01 AM

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  
Powered by vBadvanced CMPS v4.1.1