i think the wireframe looks great. this might not make sense, but its nice to see a wireframe that doesn't go to the edge of the image. i'll be using it fo' sure

the second needs some lighting to give more depth. i know a little about C4D but the program is so complicated lol >_<. like to make really nice C4Ds you gotta use HRDI maps and gotta make all these materials rah rah rah...

i'd like to see some more wireframes, wonder what it would look like if you could colour it.