lol i'll reply. Sry nobody commented usually the void is betetr about this.

Not bad. The BG is pretty good. I like the smudging and the black and green combo. Just watch out for that pen tooling, it doesn't really work so well.

The blending needs work. I casn clearly see every edge of the render, so you definetly need to overlap partsof the BG onto the render. Maybe use a c4d or something to do that?

The lighting is good, but it's in the worng spot. It should be in exactly the opposite spot. Look at the highlight on shadows head. You need to put this on the left side of his ehad not the right.

The text is good, i like the default font. Just stay away from blending optioins, no stroke and no gradient. It'll be much better if you do that. It doesn't blend in with them.


Not bad though I do like the BG. It;s got good flow and depth.

Work on blending, text, and lighting.