Sorry man, but this really isn't working as you said above. I can't see the guy from fallout 3 in there! I can see the effects you were going for but I think I've made a decision on the sigs you've been making lately. Basically, they all have sexy effects, but only when they have color. Anything that's black or white can't pull off the effects as neatly as the color ones. So in my opinion, stay clear of black and white renders if you wanna continue the style you're creating.