I disagree Epically. This has a huge amount of potential.
The Lighting is Catastrophically good and the colours look good if a little verging on mono. Needs some more depth and crop it in from the left cos its a bit big atm, more banner than sig, keep working on it mate cos it could look amazing. Your best work yet imo.
I want to know how the fook u made the C4D background. It's right up my line of Graphic/Art taste. Very Tribal, very cool.