Some of my work... comment..

[ReTry]

some of the pass work that i've done in the past... let me know what you guys/gals think...

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[oNo]

need to work on your text, one some of these. A lot of them look Lq.

Welcome to the void.

[ReTry]

need to work on your text, one some of these. A lot of them look Lq.

Welcome to the void.

Thanks for the comment and welcome... but what does Lq. mean?... i'm still pretty new to Gfx....

[-MM.Kritez]

1.interesting effects, i dont like the over contrasted white behind her. also the random smugged/clone stamped eye on the right is a bit distracting, i get its purpose, but maybe lower its opacity/just get rid of it. text color and font need work.

2.WONDERFUL effects and focal point. dont like the text = sideways text always bothers me, and the outterglow on it is eh. = straighting up the text, take off the outterglow and see if it helps.

3.nice effects, but the colors dont add up, solve this by adding some adjustment layers and gradient maps. im not feeling the facial smuge = lower its opacity or get read of it completely. the text is LQ and doesnt fit, change the font and lower its opacity.

4. great effects, good lighting. text can use some work = make it smalled/different font/lower opacity.

5. i dont like it as much as the black and white, IMO skin color is not a good color other than on the render.

6. my least favorite, text needs work = take off the reflection and change the font and blend the text is. the render looks LQ and his BRIGHT green light saber is distracting. the green c4d on the left is out of place and not blended well. work on that.

Overall great job, keep the work coming, i look foward to seeing more

[ReTry]

Thanks for the comments Kritez, I see that most of the problems i have is placing and effecting the text... plz tell me what Lq is becuz im a few months new into gfx...lol but i appreicate the feedback...

[-MM.Kritez]

lol, LQ= low quality. sometimes the artist cannot help it, it could be the render or text they chose. sometimes a simple sharpen can help, sometimes it exaggerates the problem.

hope this helps man!

[ReTry]

Thanks man, I'm goin to create a new sig in a few mins... first in like 2 months.. hope u guys like...

[-MM.Kritez]

great! i hope you post it tonight!