Dance in the Dark

[The Fame Monster]

Personally, i certainly like the text better (PS, move it closer underneath it).

There is still work to be done on the tag itself, but the text is looking alittle more promising.

When moved closer, it becomes very hard to read because of the background it falls on (the Orbit).

And I really would like to hear your thoughts on other ways I can improve it! Please, do share.

[-MM.Kritez]

see, the problem is... the "orbit" costume that she is wearing makes it hard to add C4Ds, because it already has so much going on. I personally feel that the BG is a bit boring and dull. A few neat ideas to spice it up: A runway stock (make it look like she is showing off her orbit outfit on a runway), this would add some great depth because you could make the runway blurrier the farther away it got. A stage stock (since gaga is a artist, she is always on stage, this would fit well and give it depth and possibly a nice lighting source).

When adding stocks, BE CAREFUL, you have to make sure that the stock: fits the render, is aligned properly with the render to make it look realistic, and matches colors with the render.

GL, hope this helps!

[The Fame Monster]

see, the problem is... the "orbit" costume that she is wearing makes it hard to add C4Ds, because it already has so much going on. I personally feel that the BG is a bit boring and dull. A few neat ideas to spice it up: A runway stock (make it look like she is showing off her orbit outfit on a runway), this would add some great depth because you could make the runway blurrier the farther away it got. A stage stock (since gaga is a artist, she is always on stage, this would fit well and give it depth and possibly a nice lighting source).

When adding stocks, BE CAREFUL, you have to make sure that the stock: fits the render, is aligned properly with the render to make it look realistic, and matches colors with the render.

GL, hope this helps!

You see, that sounds like a really cool idea!

The only problem is when I create a piece, I often had a very original idea. I have no idea what the thought behind this one is, but it was supposed to be her alone, in the dark, with lights spiralling around her. Hence "Dance in the Dark". I think a stage would defeat the point.

I think however, I will probably make a new tag once this one is completed revolving around your idea - because I really like that.

Do you have any ideas of effects I could add to the background, rather than stocks, which would enhance the general "magical" feel of the image I am going for?

Thanks a lot - you're a huge help!

[-MM.Kritez]

if your looking for a magical effect.... MAYBE you could try a space stock.... it would give an interesting effect... but thats just a MAYBE, lol

[The Fame Monster]

if your looking for a magical effect.... MAYBE you could try a space stock.... it would give an interesting effect... but thats just a MAYBE, lol

OMG!

That is perfect! Not only does it show the glimmer and shine, but it also relates to her sci-fi Orbit. PERFECT.

[-MM.Kritez]

... gosh im awesome

[The Fame Monster]

v3:


Added the space stock. Also sharpened her face and chest.