I dont have time atm, in classes, i will read it at home.

I read first few lines, here are some tips, "Of course Mum. Sorry" Cid apologised and helped out, like there we know he apologised so you dont have to remind us again that he apologised. Helped out? thats a wrong way, Cid apologised and helped her, would be a better way.
the next line you are introducing the guy, os start off in a new paragraph, not in the same one.

the rest at night