Haha. Who is Noel Gal____? The name is in the bottom right. Was that on the render. You might want to erase that. :P

It is an alright start. Wayyyyy too wild. No flow, which is something you will want to learn pretty much first off. Good job blending the render to the background, but next time try to stay away from the head. That is the main point of the render, so don't really mess with it too much.