Okay. I'll comment.
I think the text needs work on. The alignment is poor and I think it is spaced out too much. Also the black color and transparent really spells out boring for the viewer. Try and make an interesting clash. Even if its too cliche, black and white would do wonderfully, depending on how use. I find the message at the bottom taking attention from the focal. Work on these aspects. I look forward to seeing your improvement.
Originally Posted by Slave
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