1. That effect over her face is distracting. Did you blur the body and effects? Why? You want the effects to compliment the focal not make them less visable. Also I'm trying to figure out the flow to this so work on that and text is no-no.

2. Nice nighting however the smudge is very messy and the white smudge next to the focal is distracting imo. And do you have text in this cuz it looks kinda wierd.

Overall keep working on flow. kiu though