TRUKENDOOS XL

[Rai]

This is my design for an upcoming international breakdance event in Holland. If I win with this design I'll get free entrance hehehe.

Took me an hour to make with my cintiq and photoshop (-: please critique

[Aether]

Looks awsome... but is it me or do the legs twist in an unnatural way?

[Rai]

Looks awsome... but is it me or do the legs twist in an unnatural way?

thanks! yeah, there are a lot of crazy guys training to be mad flexible!

[Aether]

[Dennis.]

Looks awsome... but is it me or do the legs twist in an unnatural way?

I saw the picture and just thought "oooh, painfull". Also, i think the black background is a bit plain. Why not add a street stock or something? Maybe set it to black and white so the colours stand out more.
Besides that i think it is great. Are you keeping the design like a sketch or completing it?

[Agato]

I like it a lot but the arm by his neck looks like his head got cut off xD
IMO
but I hope you win ;]
GL

[Rai]

I saw the picture and just thought "oooh, painfull". Also, i think the black background is a bit plain. Why not add a street stock or something? Maybe set it to black and white so the colours stand out more.
Besides that i think it is great. Are you keeping the design like a sketch or completing it?

I tried keeping the picture in the style of the event: www.thenotoriousibe.com

It's true that the black background may be plain, but I like to keep it to a simplicit level. Furthermore, I think breakdance and images of the 'street' is a big cliche so therefor I chose not to do that hehe

[Dennis.]

I tried keeping the picture in the style of the event: www.thenotoriousibe.com

It's true that the black background may be plain, but I like to keep it to a simplicit level. Furthermore, I think breakdance and images of the 'street' is a big cliche so therefor I chose not to do that hehe

It is a bit cliche haha, but i would imagine that most people do it there. It is also more interesting than a gym or whatever

[Scrib]

decent idea man except your linework around the actual figure is wayyyyyy too messy :/ it has to get cleaned up I think, I can see you were going for that look but it's nor working , especially with the font you used fix that up and it should be good

[theCursor]

i think it's great!
very nice piece of art
hope you'll win