Kritez: Green Lantern

[Nc96]

Not your best, Kritez.
There is too much topaz, which I don't know why people like.

Your focal, Green Lantern looks a bit distorted and I'm not a fan of the effects.
Sorry mate, just not feeling this.

yes! and it is monotone (although it's green ), even the txt is green it's cool that it's green but still it's not good for sig if it's monotone...

LS is just ok i don't fill it's on the right spot but OK...

and once more YES it's too overtopazed...

I fill it's kinda overcontrased on some spots.... txt is hmmm good for start but needs some work + it's to big

Depth is OK...
there is some nice flow but your focal is a bit to big also, + don't forget rules of third, your focal is centered wich is also (-) for the wow fill of tag .... and I would recomande you to make less width tags (have on mind that standard size is 385X150 so don't do spme pices that aren't in same proportion at all (I'm not saying u have to make them exactly propotional to that size but it cant be 385X150 is nerly = 400x285 ) I hope u understand what i want to say)

But it's green so COOL...
It's Nice pice but you could re-open PSD and try to fix some things

Just Kip it UP