Omg, finally

[GoldenDagger]

you didnt but it looks oversharpened and over contrasted. the left side is dark and the effects dont really match. the change in colour from left to right is way too abrupt. needs blending.
keep trying m8

[edwinpabito]

maybe it was the contrast that made it look sharpened

[Derosion]

you didnt but it looks oversharpened and over contrasted. the left side is dark and the effects dont really match. the change in colour from left to right is way too abrupt. needs blending.
keep trying m8

That's the coloring style ..
I don't really see how the effects don't match, but sure, your opinion.