i love ur style, but on this piece i think u over blended the focal a little , and the right side seems quite empty ;[ because the effects seem same over the piece, try maybe not to make tags so slim, or so wide o.o [ i mean long.. ] play with dodge and burn tool, shadow the piece. add some depth ;] and could be really unique peace there.
I really love ur work, i hope i didnt offend u in anyway.