grammar needs a little work, (who not whom... "this is the person who everyone dreams of being") Just for future reference

anywho(m)
(jk)

looks alright. you need to find a good color pallet to work with. the purple doesn't really go with the dude at all. also the theme doesnt fit your focus. this guy is being amusing and weird while your background is smooth and swirly and lithe and mysterious kinda... also need to work on blending between the layers. right now the guy is just kinda sitting in there. try incorporating him into the background and foreground a little more. kiu!